Essay Corrections:
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Open in new tab Two Things to Improve:
- I would like to be more concise with my writing and get straight to the point with my ideas.
- I believe I can work on trying to phrase my ideas in a clearer manner that would make a lot more sense.
Two Things I Did Well:
- I integrated my quotes quite well and introduced them a lot better this time around.
- I worked on the grammar and different lessons we did in class and used them in my essay in a successful manner.