Two things I’m proud of this essay would be my mechanics and my formatting. I think I did a very good job on proper grammar as well as sentence fluency, this helped my essay be easy to read and follow. I also think I did a good job on formatting, my sentences and paragraphs are organized and well-written as well as completely thought out.
Two things I would like to improve on for next time would be repetition and length. I tend to repeat myself in the essay and it can get repetitive; improving on that would make my essay more effective. I think I can also shorten some parts, for example, I go too in-depth when I should only be summarizing in the conclusion. If I improve on that I think my essays will flow a lot better.