Thursday, Friday – April 4, 5

Agenda:

Friday:

  • continue working on the Dialogue story:
    • a decent first draft is due on Tuesday for peer review

Thursday:

  • today you will begin the process of writing a short, short story (2 – 3 pages)
  • the instructions for it are in the short story tab of the blog
  • the first draft of the story is due Tuesday, April 9 for peer review – arrive with a printed paper copy!
    • sharing your writing for constructive feedback from someone other than the teacher is a good thing 🙂

 

 

Wednesday, April 3

Agenda

 

  • Discussion of Dialogue Activities assignment – have out on your desktop, while I am going around, skim through the podcast transcript
  • Scales – Prompt:
    • In any POV that you want, focus on one of the Afghan girls who no longer is allowed to go to school, and write a short scene where she has a conversation (dialogue) with her mother about her desire to go confront the Taliban at the school; the mother does not want her to go because she is afraid for her daughter.
    • if the the mother/daughter scene does not interest you then choose another ‘scene’ from the transcript where a conversion can occur; for instance, between the Muay-Thai teacher and one of the girls; which ever one you choose, make sure you focus on dialogue:
      • what conversation would reveal the fear, anguish, frustration and anger of being told you can’t go to school because you are a girl?
      • try to use one or two of the writing tips by Jenkins, which you should have summarized in your homework.
    • the two sections from the transcript with the background details might help you: part of the transcript

Wednesday, April 3

Agenda

 

  • a bit of grammar: run-ons – start with sentences review
  • go to the Writing and Grammar Tab and open the following documents under the heading Materials for comma-splices and fused run-ons::
    • Grammar Rules
    • Sentence Types – this contains info for the review assignment
    • Sentence Types Review – this is due tomorrow
  • Introduction to the Narrative Essay Unit:
    • what is a narrative essay?
    • watch the Coke Ad to discuss narrative process, work on the Padlet assignment

Tuesday, April 2

Agenda:

Grade 12 Curricular Competencies

  • some discussion of the Literary Synthesis essay:
    • we need to work on run-ons and fragments – sentence structure
    • when you write about a literary essay, you need to use the language of literary analysis, supported with evidence and details from the stories NOT just…
    • … generic statements without actual discussion of the details from the story
    • many of the instructions were not followed: discuss Hopepunk (quotes from Rowland materials) not just hope; incorporate discussion of techniques; quote integration; MLA; using the graphic organizer, which outlined as did the instructions, to discuss the importance of literature… and others
    • too many instances of writing that was not authentic

Synthesis Essay Reflection

Work on the horizon:

  • Grammar: run-ons -go the Writing and Grammar Tab of the blog
    • work on the Sentences Types Review document
  • Narrative Writing Unit Introduction – all materials are in the Writing and Grammar Tab of the blog

Tuesday, April 2 – Friday, April 5

Agenda

 

Wednesday:

  • you should have the Literary Brainstorm sheet finished: all the details from it sorted out and the synopsis started
  • Mr. Barazzuol will come today to class to go over the project

 

Tuesday: I hope you all had a restful and fun Spring Break!

  • You should have read the materials sent on the TEAMs notification
  • Mr. Barazzuol will be coming to class tomorrow (Wednesday) to discuss the project further
  • All materials are on the Short Story Tab of the blog

Tuesday, April 2

Agenda

 

I hope that you all had a wonderful break!

  • Today – you will be reading and writing!
    • start with a Scales Free Write for 10 – 15 mins – many of you went on trips over the break – maybe there is something to source out of those memories… maybe a poem or a rant or travel blog style scale about the power of understanding different perspectives on the world through being in different places in the world. Traveling is like putting on a new pair of glasses, which not only broadens and shifts our view of the world, but we look at our identities differently as well.
    • but whatever you choose to write, make sure you are incorporating: Sentence Variation for Creative Writing as well as NEW devices and techniques – 10 Rhetorical Strategies
    • THEN… complete all of the Dialogue Activities, including READING the Hemingway story; I will be checking on Wednesday for formative assessment (homework) marks

Monday – Friday, March 11 – 15

Agenda

 

Wednesday:

  • a quick discussion of the Dialogue assignment – in the Short Stories Tab (you will need ear-buds)
  • begin the interviews outside in the hall

 

Tuesday:

  • continuation of the Scales assessment activity
  • Assessment interviews start tomorrow

 

Monday:

  • Read something from this website – Teen Ink – a great online magazine of Teen Writing – settle into something quickly
  • word on your Assessment and Reflection for your Scales – all materials are in the Experimental Writing Tab
    • a reminder that the interviews begin Wednesday – we will spin a random number wheel generator for who goes first and then it will proceed alphabetically from there
    • a reminder that when a student is with me, the rest of the class will be working a new assignment
    • I need to interview each class:
      • Wednesday is a short day (60 mins)  – so four or five people at roughly 8 mins each
      • Thursday and Friday = regular schedule (80 mins) means 7 people on each day at roughly 8 mins each
      • so, please be ready, organized, and practiced for the time given with your work printed off for you to present/discuss with me

Monday – Friday, March 12 – 15

Agenda

 

Wednesday

  • detailed graphic organizer with quotes that you want to use figured out  by the end of class along with a thesis statement and a hook
  • first draft due by the end of tomorrow’s class
  • final draft due by the end of Friday’s class

Tuesday

  • Review MLA
  • work on essay

Monday

  • Finish discussion of Hopepunk quotes
  • Review of the essay documents – on the short story tab of the blog

Monday to Friday – March 11 to March 15

Agenda

 

Thursday

  • GYV – questions #1 – 5 are due today for HW and a discussion
  • if time the we will start the COL Brainstorm Sheet

Wednesday

  • Short Schedule today
  • review: theme for The Sea Devil
  • read Gentlemen, Your Verdict – the story is in the SS tab of the Blog:
    • questions #1 – 5 are due tomorrow (Thursday)

Tuesday

  • finish the work for the rest of the questions
  • review page 3 of the grammar package

Monday

  • Homework check: questions #1 – 3 are due (including the plot on the paper)
  • Continue to work on the rest of the questions – they are due tomorrow