Synthesis Essay- Kennedy Ross- Bloc A

Two things I did well on this assignment were how well I integrated my quotes, and the punctuation and citations to go along with them. Another thing I did well, was my use of a large vocabulary, which took quite some time to acquire because I was being so picky. One of the things I can work on is my argument support, I need to give more context for my quotes and support them with more background information. One more thing I would like to work on is making sure that my thesis contains all of the information that I need, so that I can integrate it throughout my essay.