Narrative Essay- Kennedy Ross – English 10H
Two things I did well : I was able to provide lots of imagery throughout the essay. I used lots of different poetic devices to intrigue the reader. I also did a good job of integrating my dialogue. It has been something I have struggled with in the past, so I was proud of my progress.
Things I would like to improve: I would like to improve cutting out deadwood in my writing. I love detail, but I can get carried away with being too wordy. I would also like to do better at focusing at one purpose. I can be stubborn when it comes to my writing, so if I get carried away, I try to find a way to go back to my original theme, even if it doesn’t make sense.
Love the photo!!! Awww!!