May 2

EAL-Skills–My Poem

 The Lovely Killer

A beautiful girl passed by me

My heart smelled her sweet fragrance

I told myself:

I miss her, I miss her, my little beauty

I was too excited to sleep that night

Where are you?

How to find you?

I told myself:

I miss her, I miss her, my little beauty

God must hear me

The golden sun shining on your graceful smile and long hair

That same sweet fragrance when we first met

The magic scent stuck in my nose

I told myself:

I miss her, I miss her, my little beauty

I won’t let you run away

You will stay with me forever,

I promise

My best work—you

What a exciting thing

I told myself:

I miss her, I miss her, my little beauty

When I found you

In a cute house, only you

Dark like a knife, sculpted in an excellent outline

Just like I wanted

I told myself:

I miss her, I miss her, my little beauty

There is a fire in my chest

A cat and mouse game

The scream of terror

One part, two parts……

The smell and the feeling

The fragrance becoming stronger and stronger

I said to her:

“Look my beauty, you are mine”

She was a beautiful princess

Wearing exquisite dress and a shiny crown

Nailed to the wall

Explanation 

This poem is free verse, because I think this type must much easier. I like reading horror novels and watching horror movies, so this horror poem, just for fun. I heard there were some terrible murder cases happened, and the victims were the girls, so I want to write a poem about it. This poem doesn’t have the theme, just wants to warn all the ladies don’t easily trust stranger, he might be a lovely killer. I do not use rhyme because I forget it. I used Repetition, Imagery, Metaphor and Personification. In my poem, “my heart smelled the fragrance,” this is personification; Every ends of paragraph have “I told myself: I miss her, I miss her, my little beauty.” this is repetition; At the last, “There is a fire in my chest, a cat and mouse game” this is Metaphor, the cat stands for the killer and the mouse represents the beautiful girl.

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Posted May 2, 2016 by katew2014 in category EAL Skills

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