This is the image I chose for my narrative essay Nine Months because it really symbolizes what my story is trying to put forward. The lesson was that even in the darkest of times, there may still be even a glimpse of hope – in this case, that hope is the single lit candle in the middle of a black room.

I will improve my next essay by using less unneeded words (deadwood) and spend more time on sentences that seem too choppy, making my assignment easier to read and more organized.

What I feel I did well on was the grammar, as well as the way I told the story (using descriptive words, imagery, etc.).