Narrative Essay Corrections – ‘Cat-Napped’

 

What I did well on: I did very well on interpreting my voice into this essay, and incorporating many poetic devices such as similes, metaphors, and the rule of threes.

What I can improve next time: I can improve on deleting unnecessary information. I had a lot of phrases and words that didn’t need to be in the essay, and once they were deleted, the essay became more fluid and understandable.