Thank you for posting your introductory response explaining ‘New Media,’ fragmented usage of media, and suggestions on maintaining healthy digital habits. The following are observations I have made regarding your post, based on our most recent lesson:
– MLA format is well set-up and structured on your response
– Great use of Formal Writing (3rd person pronouns, avoids contractions, avoids abbreviations, elevated language)
– You have done an excellent job of incorporating a quotation as evidence and have integrated it properly, as demonstrated in class.
Thank you for posting your introductory response explaining ‘New Media,’ fragmented usage of media, and suggestions on maintaining healthy digital habits. The following are observations I have made regarding your post, based on our most recent lesson:
– MLA format is well set-up and structured on your response
– Great use of Formal Writing (3rd person pronouns, avoids contractions, avoids abbreviations, elevated language)
– You have done an excellent job of incorporating a quotation as evidence and have integrated it properly, as demonstrated in class.
This was a pleasure to read!
Thank you,
Mr. Barazzuol
English Teacher