group members: Julia, Mike, Jenna, Carson, Jessi, and Isaiah
Group Members: Julia, Mike, Jenna, Carson, Jessi, and Isaiah
Group Members: Julia, Mikee, Jenna, Carson, Jessy, Isaiah
This year, I had the opportunity to explore the topics censorship and identities more. I now have a better understanding of what they are about and how they reflect on our society. I learned better ways to write and format an essay and how to write a synthesis essay. My thinking did expand because I had to look in a different perspective on the way we see things and or read. We learned when and how to use colons and semi-colons in paragraphs and that…
Two things that I am proud of are I was able to complete my essay on time in a few days and that I put a lot of effort into this synthesis essay Two things I will improve are in-text citations and having my topic sentences connect to the paragraphs.
Kairi, Adriano, and I created a computer to represent a website. The website we designed was to help improve the refugee system and how we can create a new form. Refugees are excluded, unfamiliar with their new surroundings, and are trying to keep their culture/identity. The website is to take the opinions of the general public, politicians, and refugees on how the system can be improved and what they want to see. It was fun to work as a group to build our own website/computer.…
The persuasive paragraph was fun to write about one side of an on going debate I was able to explore both perspectives on a racial slur topic What I would work on for next time is making sure my citations are correct and in the write place for in-text citations.
Reflection: It brought back a lot of memories when I was writing this essay, but it was a topic that I needed to remember. It was nice to have the freedom to write about an experience or something we learned. For future narrative essay’s, I need to make sure my writing has more sensory.