Things I did good on:
- I did good on sentence fluency. I tried my best to give a sense of flow into my narrative and sentences that transition nicely from one topic to another.
- I tried my best to incorporate my own voice into my narrative and I did a good job of that
Things I will try to improve on:
- Still need to work on semi colons / colons and grammar in general
- Some sentences could’ve been worded differently to sound better