Persuasive Paragraph Corrections

 

2 things I did well.

I think that my arguments where strong and my citations were good.

2 things I want to improve on.

I think that it was a little short so I want to be able to make longer paragraphs. I also want to get better at proof reading because I had some mistakes that could easily be fixed with a proof read.

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