In an Immigrants shoes

One thing I am proud of: I am proud that I was able to get my essay in on time and have a lot fewer errors than my last essay. I feel I improved a lot from this essay from the last.

Two things I want to improve for Grade 12:

  • Improving my grammar splices
  • using more transitions words
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