Narrative Essay

What I did well this time-

This time I did well on using short sentences to create imagery. I also did well on using literary devices to make my writing have lots of emotion.

What I could improve on next time-

Next time I will try to ‘show’ my story, instead of ‘telling’ it, and I will try to improve on my punctuation, and correct uses of commas and colons.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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