Protected: Spoken Word “Her memories were slipping away”
on Month: November 2017
on Self Assesment- A Day In The Life Of A Bill
on 
Narrative Essay
on What I did well this time-
This time I did well on using short sentences to create imagery. I also did well on using literary devices to make my writing have lots of emotion.
What I could improve on next time-
Next time I will try to ‘show’ my story, instead of ‘telling’ it, and I will try to improve on my punctuation, and correct uses of commas and colons.
“Titanium” by David Guetta
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Meaning of the Song: The meaning of this song is that people need to be strong, and fight back if they are being insulted. Being strong will make you hurt less than the one who is bullying you.
Theme Statement: When one finds difficulty by being discriminated, one may gain strength to persevere through the tough time.
“Tell Tale Heart” -Alternate ending in a new point of view.
on The point of view I used is Objective.
The police officers knocked on the door. The large door opens, and a young looking boy motions for the officers to come inside. The police officers look annoyed. They are lead around the house by the boy, and then he takes them to the old man’s room, and sets up chairs around in a circle. The police officers are talking and laughing, and the boy has a nervous look on his face. He is sweating and is very pale. He stands up and starts moving around the room. He stands up and yells, “Villians!” “I admit the deed!- tear up the planks! Here, here!- it is the beating of his hideous heart!”