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Chita zombies
In the Chita, USSR, in 1973, the Soviet military decided to build the new technological war machines named Zombie dogs and zombie soldiers. General Markov was the commander to order this engine plan in the Chita unknown chemical factory. The Soviet scientist Eagle Makarov was the main engineer to finish this plan. Markov wanted to finish it soon; however, Makarov didn’t want to finish it very quickly. He just wanted to do it precisely. As a result, these two people were involved in an extreme conflict. Nevertheless, their conflict didn’t follow the process of the plan.
After 5 years, the USSR government sent several military officers to watch the process of the Soviet zombies. Soviet PM Andropov had signed this as a secret plan to defeat the United States but they didn’t know Markov has betrayed the USSR. At 2:00 am, December 3th, 1978, Markov opened the firearm storage room and brought an AK-74 rifle and Makarov pistol followed by one hundred men who attacked the chemical lab room. He kidnapped Makarov and forced him to speak out where the secret password of the zombie cage. Makarov said the truth and Markov shot him with his AK-74 rifle. Nevertheless, Markov underestimated the Soviet detective security forces (Alpha special troops belongs to organization of KGB). The Alpha came and shot the soldiers commanded by Markov and Markov released the zombies and he used his pistol to shoot himself……
On the next morning, Alpha troops moved into the factories; then, they saw two soviet soldiers were moved toward them who look like dead people. Then they shout them: “Comrade, we are the Alpha troops, please pull down your weapons and give up your resistance, you guys had pass the Soviet country law, please surrender now!” Then, the Alpha troops began to fire their guns and these two men were not dead.
“Eagle, what does the situation look like now?” the command of the Alpha troops general Chertoff asked his solider Eagle. “Well, sir we got the company, they really look like walking dead or vampires.” Eagle said on his contact phone. “Well, are they still attacking? Why they really like Vampires? “I don’t know sir! it seems like our weapons couldn’t hurt them.” “Well, how are you Eagle?” “I have to concentrate into the hall, please send the helicopter immediately!” Eagle shouted and then Eagle and his team quickly ran to the hall, he wanted to ambush the zombies, unfortunately, more zombie came around him and ate three of them, he shot 20 zombies down and then he pushed to the airport and waited to the reinforcement. “Ah………. Wow (The voice of throw up)” “Eagle? Eagle!”
Chertoff watched the video detective and he saw the horrible things on the video. Eagle was killed by two zombies and they just made his body into pieces by hands. Also, he saw a dog and he pushed two soldiers down and bit their face; additionally, for the two soldiers, their face were only left few muscles and most part on their face were bones; then they become terrible zombies. “Shit!” Chertoff said to himself in the headquarters in Komsomolsk. He quickly reported to Moscow, then the Soviet air force sent two Mig-25 fighter jests and one Tu-142 bomber to bomb the Chita chemical factory. Eagle’s assistant survived in this biochemical attack and then he reported to the headquarters. In 9 am morning in 1973, the air force sent one mi-17 helicopter and followed by two Mi-24 armour helicopters to take him away.

the lyrics

Old man look at my life
I’m a lot like you were
Old man look at my life
I’m a lot like you were
Old man look at my life
Twenty four and there’s so much more
Live alone in a paradise
That makes me think of two
Love lost, such a cost
Give me things that don’t get lost
Like a coin that won’t get tossed
Rolling home to you
Old man take a look at my life I’m a lot like you
I need someone to love me the whole day through
Ah, one look in my eyes and you can tell that’s true
Lullabies, look in your eyes
Run around the same old town
Doesn’t mean that much to me
To mean that much to you
I’ve been first and last
Look at how the time goes past
But I’m all alone at last
Rolling home to you
Old man take a look at my life I’m a lot like you
I need someone to love me the whole day through
Ah, one look in my eyes and you can tell that’s true
Old man look at my life
I’m a lot like you were
Old man look at my life
I’m a lot like you were

systhnesis essay

Education is the necessary things that everybody are willing to be educate by your teachers and education; however, the educations is sometimes worse would drag people into the ill. Are the educations 100 percent perfect? According to the story “A teacher’s Reward” by author Robert Philips and the story “Long Long after School” by author Ernest Buckler discovered the quality of the education does not always depend on the students. Actually, it depends on the teachers using their best ways to educate well their students.

This two stories are show in nowadays our education system is not good enough. Sometimes, it is not adaptive to well educate the children. Also, the classical ways are planning to teach the children into a worse way of education. There is the evidence showed that Ms. Edward’s student Raye became worse as the reason of Ms. Edward’s education way is not appropriated for the students. It resulted with insult to Raye that enforce Raybe to loss of the confident in the story.“You did it a lot of times. He continued. In front of the whole class. They laughed at me.”(From page 384 in A Teacher’s reward). Also, Ms. Edward’s bad education make Simpson into prison for ten years. Also, this issue is clarified in this story, Ms. Edward believes herself to be a wonderful teacher in the school. Therefore, she met her own students that her student Simpson. He seemed that he was meet his teacher; however, he said that he hated his teacher Ms. Edward punished him hardly when he was a student. Ms. Edward was classified Simpson’s stuff as the reason of Simpson didn’t focus on his work during the class. However, he began to rebel to her teacher for revenge. Also, he stole his teacher’s stuff for revenge. Ms. Edward Uses a bad way to teach his students, also, his student didn’t know why he made this mistake and how he could avoid this mistake, he just knows that his teacher punished him is not an intelligent way for him. So he must set revenge.

In addition, in the story “Long Long after School”, Wes was the student in the school who was also punished by his teacher, he also hated his teacher very much. However, he finds out the reasons that his teacher punished him, he become clear that his teacher punished him is a benefit to him, therefore, he feels proud and sorry to his teacher. It is different from the “A teacher’s Reward.” It shows that different teachers have their different ways to educate students. The two different teachers from the two stories encouraged two students Wes and Simpson into extremely different personalities.

On the other hand, classical education does not work in the current education. Nowadays, teacher have their different ways on educate their students. Other teachers are trying to use the simple ways to solve the problems. Some teachers are prefer to use complex ways to teach their students. Therefore, most students hate punishment from their teacher such as hitting, insulting and classifying from their students. These educations are definitely break the student’s confident. Also, teacher always know that his student to pay attention and obey the rules, however, they never concerned on student’s mantle health. That makes student felt very disappointed. They would felt that their teacher was punished him. So, they have to stand on student’s shoes. To consider on why student make this serious mistake and how could I solve them and they would not complain to me. As a result, the student mantle health is more considerable for the teachers.

Overall, teachers are obliged to concerned about student’s mental health and are trying to use simple ways to let students know that issues they made are serious and the ways to avoid the problems. Also, they will know why their teacher punish or reward them.

The essay paragraph

In my point of view, technology is mostly negative as people use it because technology is extremely threatening to our health. For instance, the majority of people have poor eyesight because they are relying on watching videos and playing video games for a long time. On the other hand, the assault on the internet always happens around us. The government is obliged to solve these issues. Nevertheless, the government didn’t reply to this at all. In addition, the hacker issues are appearing around us. They watch our information and steal them out. Also, they do destroy our internet service system. For instance: last year, the criminal hacker group stole a weapon from the US government called “forever blue.” This disease could kill your computer. It extremely interrupted our regular work. That means, if these kind of diseases attack your computer, your response was to give it the bitcoins. However, even if you give them the bitcoins, it would still destroy our system. I want people who indulge the computer to understand that they shouldn’t indulge the computer for a long time. Also, I want to people who work with IT to know how to avoid these issues, like bitcoins and internet assault. Although the modern technology promotes our life and people are appreciating technology, this also encourages the criminal behavior in society. However, we can avoid these problems. If somebody asks me if technology is better now, why would you argue the point of disadvantage? I would like to say: “Now, the disadvantages are spread more than the advantages on the technology as we used today because of all sort of problems that are listed above.” Every employee who is working in the IT company. He is obliged to use the internet for his work. However, he is not permitted to use the internet to do another things during their work time. In addition, this issue would waste our health and time for finish work. There are few ideas which seldom people try to use them.
Sources:
Only way to avoid the bitcoins problem is shut down your computer and change another new one. (my friend Jack who worked at Microsoft company)
The high school year book attack the internet (KIRO RADIO News)
What the internet is doing to our brains (The Shallows)