Synthesis Essay Corrections

Jessica

English 10

Mrs. Thomasen

Effects of War on Individuals

War can change people, in ways one might not imagine. What effects did the events of World War 2 have on an individual? The movies Schindler’s List and The Boy in the Striped Pajamas are both set during World War 2. In Steven Spielberg’s Schindler’s List, Oskar Schindler initially exploits the Jews just for money, but soon he starts to protect them from death, by bribing the Nazis even if that risks his own life. In Mark Herman’s The Boy in the Striped Pajamas, Bruno is unaware of the horrors of what is going on, and when he goes exploring, he meets a boy named Shmuel. Later Bruno tells a lie to a Nazi Lieutenant, and Shmuel gets in trouble. Bruno and Shmuel later develop a true friendship before they meet their deaths. Therefore, both stories show how during the war, Schindler and Bruno humanize and learn to show empathy towards the Jews, because even in times of war, they saw past the conflicts. Schindler and Bruno learn to view the Jews from a different way, and that is how they became friends with them.

Oskar Schindler and Bruno are both Germans, living in two different perspectives of the war. Schindler is an adult, who moves to Krakow, a southern Poland city, as an opportunity to make money. On the other hand, Bruno is the nine year old son of a general, and moving to a new home means he has to spend his time playing alone. Schindler starts out setting up a factory and hiring Jews:

Three hundred and fifty workers on the factory floor with one purpose: to make money – for me! They won’t soon forget the name Schindler either. I can tell you that. Oskar Schindler, they’ll say. Everybody remembers him. He did something extraordinary. He did something no one else did. He came here with nothing, a suitcase, and built a bankrupt company into a major manufactory. And left with a steamer trunk, two steamer trunks, full of money. All the riches of the world… There’s no way I could have known this before, but there was always something missing. In every business I tried, I can see now it wasn’t me that had failed. Something was missing. Even if I’d known what it was, there’s nothing I could have done about it, because you can’t create this thing. And it makes all the difference in the world between success and failure, (Spielberg).

He currently has only one thing in mind: to make money from the war and the Jews. Schindler has tried many times before, but there was always something missing. War. Since now there is a war going on, he has a successful business. Meanwhile, Bruno and his family leaves Berlin, Germany. They move to southern Poland, near a concentration camp which Bruno mistakes for a farm. Bruno spends his time in isolation at first, but when he goes exploring, stumbles upon the camp and finds a boy named Shmuel. Later, Bruno’s father hires a teacher for them. The teacher teaches Bruno and his sister propaganda about the war, but the kids believe it. One day when talking to Shmuel, Bruno says, “We’re not supposed to be friends, you and me. We’re meant to be enemies. Did you know that?” (Herman). Even though Shmuel is a Jew, and they know they are not supposed to be friends, they still talk to each other. Bruno finds it hard to understand what is happening right now, because of Shmuel, what his parents tell him, and what his tutor teaches him.

The more Schindler works with the Jews, the more he began to grow empathy for them. The thought of making money, then going home was his first plan; however, he ends up using his own money to buy his Jewish workers, creating the Schindler’s list. He does this after seeing how many other Jews were horribly treated by Nazis. The war was also about to end. Schindler then comforts his Jews: “Now you are finally with me, you are safe now. Don’t be afraid of anything. You don’t have to worry anymore,” (Spielberg). He insures them that no one will hurt them as long as he is with him. He is risking his life for them. All of the people he saved are thankful of his actions, as he has saved all of their lives. Since he now will be hunted down by the Allies, he has to flee. The Jews present to him a gold ring, made from gold fillings with the words “whoever saves one life, saves the world entire” engraved on it as a token of appreciation (Spielberg). It shows that one person can really make a difference. As long as there is at least one person to show humanity in another, it will continue to exist in society. Even if only one who shows kindness and selflessness in the world, means that there is still good in the world. The ring given to him will represent the goodness to others he has done, and know it is him that needs help now. So with the ring, he also receives a signed statement hoping to save him if he ever gets captured by the Allies, signed from every single one of the Jews he saved. Schindler is very thankful and happy.

After Bruno tells a lie and gets Shmuel in trouble, they do not see each other many days later. When they do, Bruno is regretful of the scars and bruises Shmuel had from getting beat up by a Nazi: “I can’t believe I didn’t tell him the truth. I’ve never let a friend down like that before. Shmuel, I’m ashamed of myself,” (Herman). His actions hurt Shmuel, and he knows it. Their friendship grows bigger from there as they forgive each other, and Bruno promises to never do it again. The bond between the Jewish boy and the German boy becomes so strong that Bruno was willing to leave his family to be with Shmuel. He puts on a pair of striped pajamas Shmuel gives him, and digs his way in. Instead of seeing him as, an enemy, he sees him as a human, a friend. They are pushed into a dark room, and hold each other tightly as Bruno says, “You’re my best friend Shmuel… my best friend for life,” (Herman). Bruno senses something is not right; so he wants Shmuel to know how much he cares for him. Those are the final things Bruno says to Shmuel. Words full of assurance, warmth, and love.

In conclusion, war can bring out the best and worst of people. Bruno and Shmuel values their similarities and becomes friends, unlike the Nazis who only see differences in people. With Schindler, he realizes that saving lives and being kind towards another are more important than money. As a result, the war effects Schindler and Bruno by creating a kind-heartedness bond with the Jews; making them realize they are still human, despite the conflict against them from the war.

 

What I’m proud of

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What I want to improve

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Works Cited

Spielberg, Steven, director. Schindler’s List. Universal, 1993.

Herman, Mark, director. The Boy in the Striped Pajamas. Miramax, 2009.

Letter To/From the Front

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October 1 1914

Dear Beth,

My beautiful sugar cube, I miss you a lot. Guess what? Today I almost got shot. As I flew in my plane, someone else took their aim. High up in the sky we go, seeing all the soldiers die down low. As I glide over the soft blue sky, the cool breeze brushed by me. Just then, he takes his shot, then we fought, until I got behind him and… down, down, down he went, yelling in his German accent. Till his plane hit the ground, and the man was nowhere to be found.

Soaring through the sky, fighting other guys. Sometimes dropping nails, hit some but most fails. The ones that do make it, turn people into kebabs. Oh how fun it is to be a pilot, being as noble as the colour violet. Flying planes with honour, and soon becoming goners. The reality of it can never be unseen. It is not as great as we think.

Now let me tell you about the trenches. What we go through, to pay for your expenses. Feels like you’re inside the earth. We dig the land, all by hand, then pile them up with bags of sand. Working like a beaver, hunting like a lion. Spending days here, some over there, just as long as you don’t die in the warfare. Try and pass through no man’s land, then repeat, and do it all over again. Getting lice isn’t always nice. We sit in a circle with the guys and have a chat, don’t be too scared if you see a rat.

There’s not much to do in the daytime sometimes; just wait around for lunchtime. We wake up early to watch for the enemy. As the days go by, we go to attack. Green-ish gas then appears, our greatest fear. We quickly put on our masks. Some men fall to the ground, and that’s the last time we see them around. Running on the rough earth, hearing gunshots and bombs fly on every side, have a feeling that your about to die.

If I don’t make it back, just know I think about you every day to every night, dreaming about you even in the moonlight. Before I sleep I look up to the night sky and think about how you are, my twinkle, twinkle, little star.

Sincerely, John

#gratitude

There are many things to be thankful for in 2019.

I am grateful for the people around me. Whether that be family, friends, classmates, etc. Also the people who try and make the world a better place, like certain famous people, scientists, doctors, etc.

Another thing I am thankful for is that we live in a mostly safe country. Where there is no big wars going on.

Also the internet. It may not be entirely great, but it helped me research stuff for school, text with friends, youtube, music, reading, and just a chill place.

Related imagehappy

PhotoVoice Paragraph

In this image, my concern is about the environment. This image was taken somewhere between the drive from Kelowna to Poco, and it shows green trees on the right, on the left, behind, but no trees near the middle. Originally, I would think this place used to be full of trees. maybe a forest fire, or people just cut down trees? Whatever it is, there is just a blank piece of land now. In the bottom right, you can see something that looks like garbage. This image is a problem considering littering, deforestation, and pollution. With that land, you can plant more trees, make a farm, or maybe create more housing. I would plant more trees because there is nothing there right now, and it would be a good use. If you look at it for a while, you can sort of see the faint sun ray shining across the trees. My thinking behind the composition is how you can just see this piece of land spread across the picture.

What I learned from Visual Literacy is that if you don’t have the whole picture, you can’t see the whole story. People can also be manipulated by images and news these days, and the media is just brainwashing us all. There are many problems on Earth, but we are so focused on only seeing half the photo, we don’t know fully what’s going on. We only believe and know what the photographer took. Or at least this applies to most people. We should learn to see past the photo and news, and learn to see from different, new perspectives. What does the people/animals in the photo see, what does the photographer shows us, what they don’t show us, and why they show us.

We should all learn to be more aware of the Earth, and take better care of it. There are many people on Earth, which means we need trees. People in the community and the government should see how much better the community could be without littering, polluting our air, and using land more wisely. It is the land we all have, and we should take care of it.

Fractured Poetry Bk A

Sentence: It sits there beside my house and everyday I see it.

Phrase: All it does is sleep.

3 Words: It sits there.

I think these are verbs because ‘sit’ is a verb, so is ‘see’, and ‘sleep’. I chose these words because it describes the rock and me but mostly the rock. Maybe not physically like how it looks like but what it does. I chose ‘it sits there’ because I think it matches the rock perfectly and it really just sits there. For my phrase I say that it is sleeping because the rock sleeps all day and night and eternity. The sentence goes in a little bit of detail that the rock lives beside my house and just stays there. Another thing I found thats similar is how the rock just does its own thing and no one knows what is i doing. It seems like it has no meaning in the galaxy, but really it can be very useful. Sort of like expecting nothing from it at first and then learning what it actually does. What I learned from this was objects or anything really, can be viewed in many ways. A short story, poem, all describing it using words that go along.

Poem:

It is here,

it is there,

it is everywhere.

It has a lot of meaning,

though it just sits there dreaming,

or is it?

I don’t know,

we will never know.