One thing I’m proud of are the ideas I used and how I explained them. Two things I want to improve on is creating a better hook to catch the readers attention and making sure to stay on topic when explaining my ideas.
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One thing I think I did well on was using the proper grammar when it came to using colons and semi colons. I think I can improve on integrating different sources into my evidence and having stronger and deeper arguments
This image shows fear because this is a photo I took when I was home alone and someone randomly rang my door bell twice and this is what I saw when I looked out the window. The rest of the night I was really cautious around my house, I was hesitant to turn on lights or make noise and overall just scared in my own home. I feel like now I’m just more cautious to answer doors or meet or talk to strangers because I don’t know whats going to happen. I think the only way to reduce the power it has over me is for me to be more optimistic and not think that every situation or interaction I come across is going to be bad. I learned that it’s possible to feel fear even in places that you may feel the most safe. I learned that I need to feel safe around others.
In the movie Wonder, directed by Stephen Chbosky, the protagonist August Pullman who was born with Mandibulofacial Dysostosis or Treacher Collins Syndrome, enters fifth grade at a public elementary school for the first time. August is insecure about the way he looks so to hide his face he wears an astronaut helmet but takes it off before he enters the school. Auggie gets made fun of because of his facial condition and struggles to make new friends. One day a boy named Jack Will decides to sit with Auggie at lunch as he sees Auggie is sitting alone. Auggie and Jack begin to bond, start to hangout after school and get to know each other more. During the school’s end year field trip Auggie and Jack go to the forest and run into some older boys from a different school. During this interaction the boys made fun of Auggie’s face and started to push Jack and Auggie around. As Jack and Auggie were being pushed to the ground older kids from Auggie and Jacks school came and began to fight the older kids from the other school so that Jack and Auggie could run away. After the fight was over, Auggie and Jack found the older boys from their school to thank them for what they had done. From that moment many different children began to accept Auggie despite the way he looks. Auggie made friends and people saw him for the person he was and not how he looks. Humans can be accepting; we need to look past what we see on the outside so that we can accept and include people for their more deep and meaningful qualities. This movie shows that even if people are different on the outside we can all accept each other for what’s on the inside, our personalities standout more than our appearances and we don’t need to exclude each other because of the way we look.
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https://www.scmp.com/culture/film-tv/article/2121745/film-review-wonder-room-star-jacob-tremblay-plays-boy-facial
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