Who’s Really in Control?
You throw your unwants on the ground of my home
Yet you call it yours
You depend on my hard work to provide for your family
Yet you don’t believe so
Your life, the way you work, depends on me
Yet you continue to ignore me
I admit you are clever and inventive,
Yes you have split the atom
But that atom created nuclear war fare.
Yes cars are convenient
But you have made the thermostat go haywire
You have put the earth under a heat trapping blanket
You have ruined the beauty God has given you
You destroy the arctic floor for oil
You harvest minerals from oceans depth
It’s shameful, it’s disgusting
I have the power, I am in control
Yet you hide behind your neon gods
You have taken for granted the gift I have given you
You are in trouble, I am your solution
You now need me
Need me to fix your mistakes
But I could get rid of each of you life sucking creatures
The water would flow on
The sun would continue to shine
Rain would continue to fall
And the earth would continue to spin
The ground of my home would be fresh
No more unwanted possessions
I have the power, I am in control
And unless someone like you cares a whole awful lot
Nothing is going to get better.
It’s not.
“Who’s Really in Control?” by Jenna Traub is an interesting take on society destroying the earth. It’s a free verse poem with some repetition throughout the poem. The narrator is mother nature and she’s telling humanity they need to get it together otherwise this earth will fall apart. She starts off by saying this earth is her home, meaning that she’s in control and we are just visitors. She quotes the Suzuki essay on how humans are destroying the environment. She explores the inquiry question how do we cope with shame by saying we don’t, we hide behind our phones and technology, our neon Gods which is a direct allusion to The Sound of Silence. She also mentions God which is interesting as Mother Nature and God are both powerful people, but when she says “you have ruined the beauty God has given you.” She means that God created this world but now Mother nature takes care of it and is in control of what happens now. She makes you think that without humanity the Earth would still be here and “her home would be fresh.” Lastly she quotes the Lorax which switches the mood of the poem into hope. While the rest of the poem is despairing. Mother nature is saying that we can fix the problems we have made if we care a whole awful lot.
Jenna – the environmental theme is one of my favourites! Well done. I also really like the references you made to complement your ideas. The performance of your poem is good as well. The symbolic image is very powerful!