One thing I am proud of is my planning and organization of my essay. I generally struggle with the formatting and planning of my essay. I find it hard to structure and plan the entire thing out before starting the essay itself. I worked hard this time to plan it out before and although it did take me longer than I hoped it would, I was able to organize my ideas and thoughts. I found that this did help me write my essay and overcome the challenges I faced. Overall I was proud of my essays final result. I felt much better about it and feel more confident in my ability to plan and organize ahead of time.
The first thing I would like to improve is my grammar skills. This is something that I constantly struggle with but always try my hardest to improve. I often come to realize I understand it when using grammar sites to practice, but I struggle to combine it into my essays and writings. I always re-read and check my work fully several times and I believe I am improving in grammar. I keep it as my goal because I know that there are many ways I can improve it and I believe that I have the determination and potential to further improve for future essays, assignments and projects.
The second thing I would like to improve is my amount of detail and information. I use detail and information to elaborate on either my thoughts or the story itself and I often don’t catch when I am using too much. While editing my essay I removed and added some and at times I was able to catch myself adding more than necessary, however, there were also moments when I was not sure if there was enough, or I thought it was good. I think I did improve from my last essay but I would like to improve more to mature my writing and give it a much more professional tone.
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