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Imthink my essay could have went a lot better. I feel that I needed an extra day to go through and edit it. There were a few grammatical errors that could’ve been fixed but also I would’ve been able to make it flow way better than it did. For next essay I will make sure to take time to edit it before handing it in because I did not have too much time to edit on this one. Also I will try to make the essay flow better.