1 thing I am proud of:
I am proud of my orgination of my essay, I felt that I spent a lot of time figuring out where to intergrate my quotes and how I expanded on my explanation of the quotes.
2 things I can work on:
I can work on my quote formatting of the quotes. In my essay, I had a few formatting problems, like using a comma instead of a colon.
I can also work on proofreading more, I had some words missing at times in my essay, and I also had a few spelling mistakes that are easily overseen if I quickly skim through my essay before handing it in.