About my this essay, I think I improved my grammar, and I also reduce the grammatical mistakes. and second one is I use some strong word to prove my idea and more colourful of my essay.
Next time, I think I should increases the logical thinking, and make essay more logical. And second thing is more details to write and try to including all the informations, not just write the summary.
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