Narrative Essay

 

Two things that I was proud of in this narrative were my hook and my imagery of how I showed the story instead of telling it. Two things that I need to work on for my next narrative are my word choice and my grammar. I tend to use the same words a lot in my essays so I need to use different synonyms to have more variety. I also had many grammatical errors in the essay that I needed to change.

 

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