Two improvements: I feel like during this synthesis essay I could have selected the point method which would have worked better with my sources. Since they were both quite similar, that layout would have fit more appropriately than the block method.
I also think that I could have chosen better quotes for some parts. Some of my quotes were a bit brief and I could have chosen one that demonstrates my perspective better.
Two things I did well: I think that I did well with my hook and got the reader engaged. I am happy with how I also introduced and incorporated my quotes. I struggled with weaving the quotes in so that they didn’t seem choppy, however, I am happy with how it turned out.
I also think that I did very well with my layout and organization. For example, I tried really hard to stay on topic when I had an idea on my mind so that my point was clear and powerful.