English 11 – Year End Review

I learned a lot about short stories and how they have a deep meaning to them. I also enjoyed the unit where we read Death of a Salesman. I enjoyed reading the play in front of the class, it was quite amusing. I also learnt more about history and how certain pieces of literature mean deeper things.

I enjoyed the story of Lord of the Flies the most. I thought the story was very good and the scenario and characters were interesting.

Death of a Salesman was the best unit out of all of them. I liked reading it with the class and I enjoyed the video project we did.

I think I improved the most in poetry as coming into this year I wasn’t very comfortable with all the terms, but after the poetry unit I feel I have become slightly more comfortable on the topic.

I could probably improve on my writing skills as I am inconsistent in my essays and paragraphs.

Case Study

Part I – The Facts of the Case

I read the headlines, almost unbelieving. From all that disaster in Port-au-Prince, Haiti, in January 2010, a miracle occurred; someone was still alive, more than 2 weeks after the buildings collapsed around her. The paper reported that Darlene Etienne, a 17-year-old university student, was found in the rubble of a home near the university, very dehydrated, groaning weakly, but still conscious, with a very weak pulse and low blood pressure. Rescuers gave her oxygen and water and immediately evacuated her to a French military hospital ship for treatment.

“She was definitely within hours or perhaps minutes of death,” said one rescuer. “It’s exceptional that she managed to survive this long,” said another. “In fact, it is rare for anyone to survive more than 72 hours without water, and no survivors have been documented in any earthquake after 14 days.”

How did Darlene manage to survive? Was it due to her ability to conserve her body water, or did she somehow gain access to a meager supply of water while still buried?

Find websites with factual  information about dehydration: Signs and Symptoms of Dehydration

  1. Title:___ Dehydration – Symptoms and causes  _____    URL: http://www.mayoclinic.org/diseases-conditions/dehydration/symptoms-causes/dxc-20261072
  1. Title:____ Dehydration in adults ________    URL: http://www.webmd.com/a-to-z-guides/dehydration-adults#1
  1. Title:___ Dehydration __________    URL: _ http://www.medicinenet.com/dehydration/article.htm

Questions

  1. How many litres of water do you think you drink daily?

3.5 litres

  1. What do you think would happen to you first should you stop taking in water?

Pain in the throat

  1. How many litres of water do you think you express daily?

1 litre

  1. What are the physical signs and symptoms of progressive dehydration?

Dry mouth, nausea and vomiting, weakness, may stop sweating, muscle cramps

  1. What might Darlene have experienced since she was unable to move around?

Muscle cramps, dry mouth, may stop sweating, weakness

  1. What do we know so far about Darlene’s physiological responses to her prolonged ordeal?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Part II Calculating Darlene’s Water Balance

The physiological consequences of Darlene’s entrapment in the earthquake rubble were dehydration, starvation, and potentially heat exposure from daytime temperatures near 35°C (95°F) and high humidity. However, let’s look first at just her ability to survive the dehydration of being buried for 15 days.

First, we should consider where water is “stored” in the body that could be tapped during Darlene’s prolonged entrapment.

Questions

  1. How is the hypothalamus involved in this case?

The hypothalamus governs the physiological functions like temperature, thirst, hunger, sleep, sex drive, mood etc. And releases the hormones into the body. This is related because it governs your thirst.

  1. Darlene was exposed to 35°C.  What is the highest temperate you can recall you have been in?

40 degrees Celsius in California.

  1. Based on the diagram above, list the major water compartments of the body.

Cells, bones, tissue matter, fluids

 

  1. What is the 60-40-20 rule for body water?

60% of body weight is water, 40% is in the intracellular fluid, 20% is the extracellular fluid

  1. Assuming that Darlene did NOT have access to water during her entrapment, how would her body begin to lose water? She would probably sweat out most of the water due to the heat.

 

  1. What are the specific avenues of water loss?

Evaporation, urine, feces

  1. What is the function of vasopressin?

To retain water in the body and constrict blood vessels

  1. How much water is produced when fat is metabolized?

Around 100 grams of water per 100 grams of fat

  1. How might the body immediately begin to reduce those avenues of water loss in Question #4?

Metabolizing fat

  1. What important physiological reflexes would minimize the rate of water loss from those specific avenues?

Vasopressin would constrict blood vessels

  1. How would changes in blood flow to specific organs help Darlene resist dehydration? Consider how reduction of function in particular organ systems might help conserve water.

If certain systems that are unnecessary at the moment do less work than she will use less energy and focus on conserving more water

  1. Calculation of Darlene’s water loss—Enter answers in the spaces and table below as directed. 33kg/litre c. Data from published studies on women show that water loss varies as a function of age, weight, and environment. Values range from 2.7 L/day for young female adults (Sawha et al., 2005) to 3.3 L/day in active (but not exercising), young female students (Westerterp et al., 2010). How many days without water could Darlene survive at this rate of dehydration, assuming a maximum of 12% body water loss? Record your answer in the table below.  f.  At the absolute minimal rate of water loss (7e) and maximal tolerance of dehydration (20% of total body water from 7b), how many days without water could Darlene survive? Record your answer in the table below.  7b.  12% of total body water in litres _____________6.6litres__________________________
  2. 7b.  20% of total body water in litres ____________11litres___________________________
  3. 7a.  Total body water in litres (55 kg human) _______33litres__________________________
  4. g. Now, based on these calculations, could Darlene have survived 15 days without water? Explain the basis for your answer.
  5. e. The absolute bare minimum water loss possible for humans, with all compensating mechanisms in force, is about 1.2–1.4 L/day (approximately 6 cups of liquid). How many days could Darlene survive at this rate of water loss? Record your answer in the table below.
  6. d. Are these water loss values (in 7c) of any use in predicting how much water Darlene might have lost per day?  Justify your answer.
  7. 11litres
  8. b. Most humans can withstand only a 12% loss of total body water before they progress to clinical shock. The lethal body water loss for humans is 20% of total body water. Based on these estimates, how many litres of body water can Darlene afford to lose? Record your answer below.
  9. a. Let’s assume that Darlene weighs about 55 kg (~120 lb). Based on the 60-40-20 rule, how much total body water (in litres) does Darlene have? Record your answer below.
Condition Rate of water loss Survival time in days
7c. Average water loss for young adult females, 12% total body water loss

 

2.7 L/day  3 days
7c. Average water loss during summer for European women (55 kg), 12% total body water loss

 

3.3 L/day  2 days
7e. Absolute minimal water loss possible in humans, 12% total body water loss

 

1.2-1.4 L/day  5 days
7f. Absolute minimal water loss possible in humans, 20% total body water loss

 

1.2-1.4 L/day  8.5 days

Part III – Finding other Explanations for Darlene’s Survival

Darlene’s survival was indeed miraculous, but was it based in part on who she was, where she lived (Haiti), and the particular conditions to which she was exposed?  Survival can sometimes depend on the smallest of advantages.

Questions

  1. Would a middle-aged, northern European (or Canadian) male tourist in Haiti have fared as well as Darlene? No he would not because males have less fat compared to females and his body wouldn’t be used to the temperature in Haiti.

 

  1. Are there physiological advantages of being a young female, born and raised in Haiti?  Describe how these characteristics might have given her an advantage.  In answering this question, consider the following: Darlene’s survival? Explain how. Yes because her being there her whole life she is used to the harsh conditions and temperature of Haiti, so her body is already prepared for this type of situations. Yes. The younger you are the better your body functions and is better prepared to survive. If you were fat than you would have more fat to metabolize. If you were male you would have less fat on you and therefore survive for less time than a female. d. Would Darlene’s sweat have more or less salt than you? Less because your blood vessels would be constricted to conserve water using
  2. f. Being a female, how does menstruation effect plasma volume?
  3. e. Would your blood to the surface of your skin be less or more?
  4. More salt because there would be less water in her sweat
  5. Because she was born in Haiti, her body is used the conditions and temperature of Haiti and her body is used to storing water quite often due to less water and more heat
  6. c. Does the fact that Darlene was born and raised in Haiti matter?  Describe the role that heat acclimation might play in her water balance.
  7. b. Does age, weight, or sex affect water loss or water requirements (see Sawha et al., 2005)?
  8. a. Could being buried in rubble in the warm, humid environment of Haiti have been an advantage for
  9. Darlene survived a prolonged period of starvation, an additional physiological challenge for her body. Paradoxically, starvation might actually offset and/or minimize some water loss.  How?

 

 

 

 

 

 

Part IV – An Answer?

Some residents thought that Darlene had been trapped in a bathroom, where she was showering at the time of the earthquake.  Darlene told rescuers she had a little Coca-Cola with her when the earthquake struck – but was there enough precious liquid for her to survive 15 days?  From the newspaper article at the beginning of the case, we know that Darlene probably did not exhibit the maximal dehydration that would have resulted in her losing consciousness (i.e., >12% body water loss).

Questions

  1. Based on your calculations above, how much water would Darlene have needed to consume daily to reduce the rate of her dehydration such that she lost a maximum of only 10% of her body water after 15 days?

 

  1. If you were Darlene, what would you have preferred instead of Coca Cola?  Why?

A bottle of water because there is no better liquid than water

  1. How might this story be different if it was in Vancouver in the summer?

it depends on who it happened to. If Darlene was in Vancouver at the time I think it would have been easier for her to survive. If it was a Vancouverite than I don’t think they would survive because they are not used o shortage of water and the heat all the time

Character Monologues – “Death of a Salesman”

Happy

I am a damned womanizer, yet I am not truly happy. I mean yes I am happy, but I can’t continue to do these things. I make a decent living, better than my brother, but my father still doesn’t give me the recognition I feel I deserve. I worry about my father too. He’s lost without Biff and he goes off on these rants talking to himself. I feel lost too even though I have a path, but I suppose that’s life. I have everything I’ve ever wanted and I should be happy, but I still feel like I’m missing something.

“The Lord of the Flies” – Human Nature

‘“He’s not Fatty,” cried Ralph, “his real name’s Piggy!”’ (Golding 27)

They got his arms and legs. Ralph, carried away by a sudden thick excitement, grabbed Eric’s spear and jabbed at Robert with it. (Golding 164)

 

“Kill the pig. Cut her throat. Spill her blood” (Golding 96).

“Here – let me go!” His voice rose to a shriek of terror as Jack snatched the glasses off his face.” (55)

“The spear moved forward inch by inch and the terrified squealing became a highpitched scream. Then Jack found the throat and the hot blood spouted over his hands. The sow collapsed under them and they were heavy and fulfilled upon her.” (Golding 192)

 

 

“Lord of the Flies” – Island Description

Reef

“This is an island. At least I think it’s an island. That’s a reef out in the sea” (Golding 7)

Beach

“The shore was fledged with palm trees” (Golding 10)

” The beach between the palm terrace and the water was a thin stick” (Golding 10)

“Here the beach was interrupted abruptly by the square motif of the landscape; a great platform of pink granite thrust up uncompromisingly through forest and terrace and sand and lagoon to make a raised jetty four feet high. The top of this was covered with a thin layer of soil and coarse grass and shaded with young palm trees.” (Golding 13)

“The glittering sea rose up, moved apart in planes of blatant impossibility; the coral reef and the few stunted palms that clung to the more elevated parts would float up into the sky, would quiver, be plucked apart, run like raindrops on a wire or be repeated as in an odd succession of mirrors.” (Golding, 79)

Scar

“The ground beneath them was a bank covered with coarse grass, torn everywhere by the upheavals of fallen trees, scattered with decaying coconuts and palm saplings” (Golding 10)

“Behind this was the darkness of the forest proper and the open space of the scar” (Golding 10)

Mountain

“The most usual feature of the rock was a pink cliff surmounted by a skewed block” (Golding 34)

Jungle

“They were in the beginnings of the thick forest, plonking with weary feet on a track, when they heard the noises—squeakings—and the hard strike of hoofs on a path” (Golding 39).

“Then, amid the roar of bees in the afternoon sunlight, Simon found for them the fruit they could not reach, pulled off the choicest from up in the foliage, passed them back down to the endless, outstretched hands” (Golding 76).

 

 

 

Walter Mitty Expressionism and Realism

The yelling snapped Walter back into reality. He put his hand to his chest and found it still intact. He took one last puff of his cigarette, threw it to the ground and pushed himself off the wall. He gazed curiously down the street and saw a well-dressed man screaming at a poor looking shoe-shiner for getting in his way. Walter could not be sure what the man was lecturing the boy about for he was far away, but it was clear that he was in a hurry and had a short-temper. The man looked at everyone he passed with disdain until he finally reached Walter. Walter smiled and nodded his head at the fellow, trying to seem friendly. Before he could utter a word, a car swerved around the corner at breakneck speed.

… “I’m very happy to be here in this great city of Waterbury!” exclaimed the President of the United States. The thousands that had gathered to witness their president for the first time applauded and cheered. “I would like to thank Mayor Campbell for his hospitality, but most of all I would like to thank the head of my Secret service, Walter Mitty! He’s a pleasure to be around and he’s the best of the best!” but Walter Mitty wasn’t listening, he was scanning the windows of the buildings around him looking for any sign of danger. 10 minutes into the president explaining his plans for the country, he relaxed slightly thinking it to be safe. Walter eyes squinted as he heard cries of help at the back of the crowd. A garbage truck careened its way through the crowd. People hurled themselves out of harm’s way and a clear path opened towards the president. Walter Mitty boldly stepped in front of the president and opened fire with his Webley-Vickers 50.80 at the driver. The police followed suit. 30 metres from the podium the driver lost control and the truck was overturned and came screeching to a halt. The people were haggard and distraught. Plenty were injured and several were dead. Walter Mitty was calm, but his extreme training had taught to him that when he feels it’s safe, he’s probably wrong. The glare of the sun off the snipers scope from the window ticked Walter Mitty off. He threw his body at the president as the shot was fired.

Photo Compilation Project for “Father and Son”

“I love him so much it hurts but he won’t talk to me” (Callaghan 1)

This quote shows how the father is desperately trying to reach out to his son.  He pours his heart out and he receives nothing from his back from his son. It shows how there is no communication with his son.

“Son you are living on borrowed time” (Callaghan 3)

This quote shows how the father is obsessed with the idea of his son dying. He is Terrified that his son will die. The father tries to tell his son that he is living a dangerous lifestyle, but the son does not listen.

“Is it my fault there is no women in this house” (Callaghan 2)

The fathers ponders on his last wife, and thinks that maybe his Son’s lack of purpose in life is due to the lack of a mother in the house.

“The door swings and he pushes a handgun under his pillow”(Callaghan 5)

The quote shows how the action rises when the father discovers the handgun under his owns son’s pillow. The father goes into complete shock, he prays under the landing and realizes the gravity of the situation.

“There is a bang” (Callaghan 5)

The climax of the story is when the father hears the loud bang. The father drops his plates and rushes to help his son. The father’s heart is beating fast and so is the readers, the climax starts and ends with a “bang”

“They have punched you and you are not hurt badly” (Callaghan 5)

The falling action is when the falling action  is when the father examines the gravity of his sons injuries. The father only seems to think that his son was punched and he does not realize the life changing hole in his son.

“I take my son’s limp head and I see a hole that should not be there” (Callaghan 5)

This quote shows how the father realizes that his son is dead. The one person he cared about so deeply is gone. This represents the falling action because the father now knows that his son is dead and that all he cared about is over.

“My son let me put my arms around” (Callaghan 5)

This is the denouement of the story as it closes off what we know. The son is dead and the father grieves for his loss. We do not cares for the person who shot him for that does not matter, all that matters is that the father grieves.

Character Sketch: Michael Foster

 

Michael Foster from the short story “Two Fishermen” written by Morley Callaghan is a journalist for a small town newspaper. He is trying to increase his reputation by writing an interesting story about a hangman who is visiting town to carry out an execution. He is a young, tall, long-legged and Caucasian. He is a single man, however he has many relationships with the people around town. He is acquainted with people from the Police Station, the newspaper and the hotel. He clearly has some sort of education, as he is very capable in reading and writing, however it is not clear his exact education. He wants to elevate his journalist career through improving his reputation and so it is clear that he is not well known which clarifies that he is not wealthy, but he has a moderate amount of money.

 

His beliefs are unclear in a religious sense but it is deduced that the way Michael talked to Smitty about capital punishment, that he disagrees with it. He is afraid of what his peers think of him and would never do anything to destroy his status with them. He is very good at communication with others and making friends. He is also good with manipulation as he pretended to be Smitty’s friend to get information about him to write a story. His weaknesses are standing up for others, as at the end of the story he did nothing when the townsfolk attacked Smitty.

 

Michael Foster is an inquisitive, efficient and eager young journalist who wants to be accepted by his peers and will do anything, or nothing to keep and improve his social status.