Red Rising Essay Corrections



Next essay I hope to further improve my thesis statement and work on my introduction. I need to know how to separate between what’s important and what isn’t relevant to my essay and thesis statement. I’m proud of quote integration which has greatly improved since the last essay and I believe I’m good at choosing relevant and insightful quotes from the book. I hope that for my next essay I can include what i learned from this essay and the last essay to write an essay that is better then both.

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