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(All my corrections are in the new essay document)

Reflection:

I believe that for this essay I did really well with the development of the story. It has a clear beginning, middle, end with a conflict and a strong message and overall cutesy story. Furthermore, I believe that I successfully incorporated many poetic devices to help with the flow of the story and keep things a lot less boring and plain. For next time, I would like to work on my colons and semi-colons. Most of the times I tried to incorporate them into my story it was successful, however, there are moments when it didn’t quite work out and that’s something that I would like to learn more and improve for next time. Overall, I believe it was a successful first attempt at an essay for English 12 and I look forward to hopefully improving for the next essay.