One thing I did really well was the writing portion, the ideas and concepts were clear and made sense and reflected what I personally believe. My idea was very original and had its own identity. My writing was funny when intended but was also able to get a serious point across, that can be at least respected from every perspective because as you know Kanye can be a controversial topic but it was definitely capable of getting its point across without offending or creating opposition out of bias against Kanye.
I honestly dont think from a writing standpoint it could be improved on, although maybe, JUST MAYBE, my delivery was a little off because I made a small mistake and lost where I was while reading it. But other than that Im very happy with how it turned out.
I personally do believe it deserved more than an 8.5 but that’s just me.