Run-on Sentence

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Run-on sentences Run-on sentence: Is when two or more independent clauses are joined forcibly. Independent clause: Is a sentence that includes a subject and a predicate and makes sense and can stand by itself. Explanation of example: “Branden is hungry Branden started to nibble Kevin’s arm.” “Branden is hungry” is a independent clause. “Branden started to nibble Kevin’s arm.” is the second independent clause. Because there are two independent clauses, this sentence is a run-on sentence!!! Then, how do we fix it?; Ways to fix it:  1. Use a period. The easiest way to fix a run-   on sentence is to split the sentence into smaller sentences using a period. ( . ) 2. Use a semicolon ( ; ) 3. Use a comma and a coordinating conjunction ( , FANBOYS ) 4. Use a subordinating conjunction. ( After before because as if etc.. ) Below some are examples.

Ex)

  • Kevin is cold Kevin ate ice cream
  • Branden is hungry Branden started to nibble Kevin’s arm

Ex)

“Branden is hungry Branden started to nibble Kevin’s arm.” could be fixed as: “Branden is hungry, so he started to nibble Kevin’s arm”.

Same as the first sentence: “Kevin is cold Kevin ate ice cream” could be fixed as: “Kevin is cold, but Kevin ate ice cream”.

Test questions:

  1. Yes or No (Is this a run-on sentence?)

“It was wonderful weather on Monday the boy flew the kite outside”

2. Which is not a way to fix a run-on sentence?

  •  Using a period  ( . )
  • Using a semicolon ( ; )
  • Using a dash ( – )
  • Using a subordinating conjunction ( after, before, because, as, if, etc )

3.  Fix the run-on sentences.

“Today was the best day in the whole world my family began our beach vacation.

4. How many independent clauses do you need in a run-on sentence?

Hint: Use the example shown above to solve the questions

Answer 1. Yes

Answer 2. Using a dash ( – )

Answer 3.  “Today was the best day in the whole world Because my family began our beach vacation.

Answer 4. Two or more

gender inequality Article

https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/full/10.1080/13573320802445017

hello my name is Branden Park i will introdce a article that is about gender equality.(If you don’t know whats an gender equality is click this URL https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gender_equality) The article in the top is about school P.E that involve kids or teenager that goes to school that is kind of unfair to both boys and girls. I choose this article because I love school P.E and always curios about why girls and boys do different  kind of stuff in P.E.

I think this article is related to “The Friday Every Thing Changed” about gender equality

Thank you!!

The friday Everything changed

1. Beacause they think its only for boys and strong people
2. The boys give them pressure by not letting the girls play softball
3. The story is told from the first persons view .
4. The setting is school in the 1950 and the conflict is protagonist vs society
5. The protagonist is the teacher and the girls in school
6. That Mr. Ralstin proves that girls can do it to