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Overall, I am very happy with the final product, and the resulting mark of my first English 12 essay. Firstly, I am proud of my use of vocabulary. It is interesting to see how it has evolved over the course of my high school years, and how much it can contribute to the quality and complexity of my writing. Secondly, I am proud of how I structured my essay. In the past, my ability to organize my writing has not been the best. I usually have a lot of ideas spread randomly all over the place. But for this essay, I was able to take time to think it out, and structure it in a professional way that was clear, concise, and well presented the points I was trying to make.
Something I know I could improve upon was my use of citations. I have never used MLA format before, so it was all new to me and was quite confusing at first. I will definitely practice with it in the future and work to improve. Less on the technical side, certain parts of my arguments could have been further refined, simplified, and clarified. These are both areas that apply to any essay, and I will be sure to be aware of, and improve upon them for Essay #2.