During the process of writing my narrative essay I think I did well on showing instead of telling. In my opinion, I did a good job of describing my situation in a vivid way. Another thing I think I improved on was the structure of my writing. I liked how I was able to make everything flow while I was reading. Two things I can work on, is clearly stating my reasoning. I understand now that nobody is in my head, and therefore they do not see why certain events are happening throughout the story. Something else would be to get to the point a bit better, instead of dragging on unnecessary details. I think I might need to get better at cutting out dead wood.
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