Month / April 2018
The Great Depression
Narrative Essay
During the process of writing my narrative essay I think I did well on showing instead of telling. In my opinion, I did a good job of describing my situation in a vivid way. Another thing I think I improved on was the structure of my writing. I liked how I was able to make everything flow while I was reading. Two things I can work on, is clearly stating my reasoning. I understand now that nobody is in my head, and therefore they do not see why certain events are happening throughout the story. Something else would be to get to the point a bit better, instead of dragging on unnecessary details. I think I might need to get better at cutting out dead wood.
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Egg Lab
Omelette: https://www.eggs.ca/recipes/basic-omelette
Egg Wraps: https://www.eggs.ca/recipes/egg-wraps
Eggs Benedict : https://www.eggs.ca/recipes/eggs-benedict
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If I were to change anything, I would have made the hollandaise sauce better. I would have put less cayenne pepper because mine ended up tasting very strong and spicy because of it. Next time I make eggs Benedict I am going to buy a pre-made hollandais sauce because it is difficult to get it right. I would also add avocado inside to give it a bit more flavour.