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Narrative Essay

 

2 things that I need to improve are:

  1. Being aware of my past and present tense when writing especially with a narrative essay.
  2. I could’ve also showed more in my writing,¬†instead of telling as much as I did.

2 things I think that I did well with are:

  1. Using a lot of dialogue to help explain emotion and feeling within my story.
  2. Having a voice throughout my story.