I loved the lesson I put out there as well as my voice, I wished I gave more effort into word choice, parallelism, and semi-colons.
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I loved the lesson I put out there as well as my voice, I wished I gave more effort into word choice, parallelism, and semi-colons.
Welcome to my English persuasive essay.
(The photo used is of Immanuel Kant, I used some of his evidence in this essay and he’s one of my favourite philosophers)
I liked my quote and evidence integration in the essay as well as my formal wording, although I wish I proofread longer in order to catch small mistakes and use more of a variety of sentence types.
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