Synthesis Essay Corrections

Corrected Essay:

Reflection: I think that my first positive about this essay would be the creative words that I used that hopefully created an interesting essay to read that had my own literary style show through a little bit. The second positive would have to be the topic itself, even though a lot of people used the two movies I think it was a good idea for me to have compared to two movies and argue which one might be better. Two things I should wish to improve on was definitely my structure in the Striped Pajamas paragraph which had many issues and had sloppy ideas put together that could have been better executed, and the “So What” which I just didn’t put in my essay for whatever reason. I threw a “So What” Into the introduction of my correction but I will admit that I do not think it is the best, as I did not have much time to think about it.

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