Narritive essay final In my essay I think I had a good lesson learned but I should have mentioned how I learned my lesson more throughout the story. As well I think my essay had a good variety of sentences however I need to improve showing rather than telling in my writing.
In my persuasive essay, I am proud of my conclusion. I think I finished my essay strong by brining back my main points in previous paragraphs. As well I think I did a good job on my final sentence in the conclusion when I ended with a question that is also a metaphor. A second […]