2 things I did well are: showing not telling and my sentence fluency
2 things I need to work on are: describing my feelings in the story and making the story more interesting for the reader.
December 5, 2016
December 5, 2016
2 things I did well are: showing not telling and my sentence fluency
2 things I need to work on are: describing my feelings in the story and making the story more interesting for the reader.
