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   bbarazzuol on February 10, 2021 at 5:00 pm

   Adrian,

   Thank you for posting your introductory response explaining ‘New Media,’ fragmented usage of media, and suggestions on maintaining healthy digital habits. The following are observations I have made regarding your post, based on our most recent lesson:

   – MLA format is well set-up and structured on your response
   – Grammar (number of options on the internet) > missing word > of
   – Good use of lead-in and reference, but read the quote and lead-in together, lacks flow, should it say the average American?
   – Great use of Formal Writing (3rd person pronouns, avoids contractions, avoids abbreviations, elevated language)

   Thank you,

   Mr. Barazzuol
   English Teacher

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