Synthesis Essay Corrections: Injustice Within the Court

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I did well on my word choice and the transition words, and my evidence seemed to be solid.

I could have improved on implementing more quotes and integrating them correctly.

I could have worked on the citations for 12 Angry Men, citing the movies was difficult for me.

Overall, I think I should work on my introduction and title.

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