If I were to write this essay again I would focus more on having a driven direction and topic and focusing more on the structuring of the essay. Practicing more with quotes and having a better intro that better describes the essay. In general I think all areas could be improved without any specific area standing out as super good. What I thought I did fairly decently would be the time management and prioritization for the most part. I was able to finish the essay on time while studying for tests at the same time. In addition to that my works cited seems to have been done well.